I dig the first line, but I was hoping for better descriptions of what the speaker could give a shit to give away, though "my casual shoes, unable to run" is nice. After shower sweat is a terrible thing, and to be unburdened to give that away is totally understandable. "My cough drop, candy / they call them, throat candies" didn't do much for me.

The best part of the piece starts at "but wondering how..." all the way to the end.

I really want to see what the speaker wouldn't mind giving away. I believe this is your first "5 min exercise." If you want to work on it more, I consider supporting the first line more.